Self-Critique

1. Title Brainstorming:

Get up

UP!

Arise Arise

Rise and shine

Evil Alarm

Killing Instinct

Morning Fury

I like Morning Fury best.

2. Evil anthropomorphic electronics.

3. Inspired by the universal hate for bad alarm clocks and malfunctioning electronics. When equipment isn't working properly it seems to have a mind of it's own. I personally loose my effing mind when programs crash or fire alarms go off in the middle of the night.

4. The main character will experience (in this order):

• Bliss- in bed asleep
• Annoyance- Alarm begins to sound
• Anger- when it doesn't stop the first time
• Shock- Momentary when the alarm clock does not break
• Pure Violent Fury- Going crazy trying to kill the clock.
• Relief- The plug is pulled.
• Defeat- Car alarm starts outside.

The viewer will experience the first two feelings along with the main character, then amusement as he struggles.

5. I sloppy boy is battling to silence his invincible unrelenting alarm clock.

6. Logic prevails over irrational anger, against evil alarm clocks.

7. The ending is a bit abrupt but I think with the addition of the car alarm going off outside after the boy collapses in bed remedies this. Also I will have to do research to decide how the main attack will play out.

8. I'm excited about having time to develop this film to the point where I feel it's complete. Having complete control is going to be awesome too.